....about Mallysphere?
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16 years ago
....about Mallysphere?
I think it's mostly nothing. I think the few images I bothered to see don't support the hyperbole. I think that ending at a plain vanilla .jpg (in a NEW TAB for Bob's sake) after all that hype and design is lame. I think that if "2006 ilyalart - part of Mallysphere" it should, you know, be part of it and not launch in a new tab under a new domain. I think illy made a typo when buying the domain ilyalart.com. I think illy might have to look out for a cease and desist letter from the coffee people. I think extra space or indenting is a good thing for new paragraphs. I think "till" is used incorrectly. I think some of the pictures are pretty. I think the pictures ultimately convey the main rhetorical thrust of the artist profile - "I like colors." This is in keeping with the stated target audience. I think the talk about "east and west" and the photographs (which feel like stock photos ripped from the web) that support it have nothing to do with the art. I think the "sphere" in the title does not manifest in the site or the art; look at that front page "SPHERE" and... a square; hunh? I think the 52 page suffers from what Robin Williams "told me" is the first refuge of the inexperienced designer - centering. I think there are some other spelling/language problems that point to not-a-native-English-speaker; no worries, but do get an editor. I think other of the colors are starting to blend to mud. I think the fingerpainting is detrimental to your credibility. I think including a headshot makes it look like a (American) real estate brochure (why do they do that? "Look, I have big hair, you should buy a house from me!"?) I think
- gruhn
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