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Nov 04, 2008
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No offense, because I do not intend this as an insult, but it would serve you well to employ an editor.
Poor grammar reflects poorly on the overall quality of a company. You may have the highest quality product and service available, but when people are reading a website with poor grammar, they often infer (even subconsciously) that the product must have a similar lack in quality.
I am specifically referring to your haphazard use of capitalization in this usenet post and on your blog/site.
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