Minor pedantic comments:
- I would use 'outside the zones' or 'outside zones' rather than 'unzoned' as those are the phrases used in the Regs and OSG.
- The words 'protective equipotential bonding' are defined in section 2 of the Regs. So I would use them on the first relevant occurence even if you want to shorten the mouthful to main bonding and supplementary bonding later in the article. Admittedly the Regs are a bit random on this point.
- 'water in electricity in close proximity' should read 'water and electricity.....'
Regards Bruce