It looks good, can't see anything obvious although there are a couple of darker spots near the bottom at the edges of the right raised portion that might be suspicious. If the raised portion around the spots can't be knocked off it looks good to go.
Nestork sugested nickel plating. A good suggestion. Another alternative, if the items are small enough, you could hot dip galvanize them. I'm not talking about zinc electroplate, I mean dipping in molten zinc which is easily melted on a gas stove.
Either will protect very well unless the coating is breached. Which it will be at the hinge knuckles; about all you can do there is apply some oil once in a while.
One thing I wouldn't do is use whatever you used before. I've been wondering about that. You said it was clear but turned black. Red rust is reduced to black "rust" by acid. Could your clear stuff have been acidic? If so, I wonder if it remained so after drying? And if it did, how did new rust form for it to reduce? Was it air/moisture permeable? Was it supposed to be primed/painted? If so, was it to act sort as a "court of last resort" if the paint barrier was breached? Understand, I have no idea, just wondering.